NAHM....the aftermath.

So. We just had a critique on our final comp. My design still needs work but I'm much happier with it compared to the first two designs. It was pointed out that my primitive drawing of what is suppose to represent "water" or a "snake" looks more like a "sperm". OOPS! I'm going to re-do the primitive drawings so they fit in and interact more with each other. Now it is time to see if this design works at 13x19!!!